To print this page, select "Print" from the File menu of your browser salon.com > Books Nov. 8, 1999 URL: http://www.salon.com/books/review/1999/11/08/minot "The Tiny One" by Eliza Minot An 8-year-old faces the death of her mother. - - - - - - - - - - - - By Lindsay Amon "Children can feel, but they cannot analyze their feelings," Charlotte Brontë wrote. Eliza Minot would have to agree, but in her first novel, "The Tiny One," she's chosen an awkward way around it. When the book opens, 8-year-old Via Revere has just lost her mother in a car accident. She's in shock, understandably, and instead of trying to process the event -- how could she? -- Via retreats in her mind to the day of the accident, looking to "find something in that day to hold on to like a rope swing, to swing with." It's a poignant and comprehensible desire, but what follows is a 200-plus-page dissection of Via's day -- recess, morning snack, social studies class -- interspersed with memories of time spent with her family and friends. After pages and pages of clamming with Via's Mum and vacationing with Aunt Nellie in Bermuda, I was desperate for something, anything, that would drive this day toward the book's central event, the accident. But there isn't anything. The novel is simply a study of an innocent youth on the verge of a life-changing occurrence she doesn't even know is coming. While there are a few beautiful and true moments, they have to compete with a clutter of period details and clichés. (Remember Bonne Bell lip gloss, playing Marco Polo in the pool, touching your tongue to your nose, or trying to?) "The Tiny One" reads like an excellent expanded writing exercise. It's barely a novel, and it's certainly not an investigation of consequential topics such as loss and grief. It's also worth pointing out that there are more than a few similarities between "The Tiny One" and the work of the author’s sister, Susan Minot, especially "Monkeys." In fact, for anyone who's read "Monkeys," the similarities are downright unsettling. Both books are written in spare prose and rely on a child's point of view. Both describe the experience of growing up in a Catholic 1970s New England household, and both center on the untimely death of the mother. More disquieting, some of the same images are found in both books. In "Monkeys," Sophie describes her father ice skating: He can go really fast. He takes off -- whoosh -- whizzing, circling at the edge of the pond, taking long strides, then gliding. His hands behind him in a tight clasp, his face as calm as if he were just walking along, only slightly forward. In "The Tiny One," Via describes her neighbor ice skating: When he's skating he looks like he's going slowly because he looks so relaxed. But really he's going fast. He glides. He clasps his hands behind his back. He digs in with bent knees so his body's tipped forward just a little bit. In some ways, though, the likeness between the Minot sisters bodes well for "The Tiny One." Eliza Minot is every bit as good as her sister at capturing intimate details, particularly physical sensations. The mud that feels like warm cream around Via's toes, the way grape soda tastes like hot bubbles in her mouth -- these are lovely, visceral images. But they are the only anchors in a book that otherwise misses its mark. Eliza Minot clearly has talent and promise as a writer, but I hope she'll cast a wider net next time. salon.com | Nov. 8, 1999